在读后续写中，稳当地融入环境描绘是一项关键的写稿时间。它并非孤苦孤身一人的写景，而是做事于故事合座的攻击妙技。通过描绘当然环境与社会环境，作家八成有用地渲染故事发生的特定懊恼，为东说念主物的动作提供确切实在的舞台。更攻击的是，精当的环境描绘能与东说念主物的内心世界酿成呼应，从而含蓄而有劲地衬托其复杂的心思与心灵活作。同期，环境的变化与发展也每每承担着示意或平直鼓舞故事情节演进的功能。最终，当环境与东说念主物荣幸和著述主题细腻辘集时欧洲杯体育，它便能升华为具有美艳兴味的意想，从而深远揭示并深化著述的主旨，使故事的意蕴更为悠长。

环境描绘六大场景

一

天气

名词

cloud 云；rain 雨；shower 阵雨；storm 摇风雨；fog雾；mist 薄雾；smog 烟雾；wind 风；breeze 微风；typhoon 台风；hurricane 颶风；tornado龙卷风；frost 霜；thunder and lightning 雷电；snowstorm摇风雪

形色词

cloudy多云的；stormy摇风雨的；foggy有雾的；misty有雾的；windy 多风的；snowy下雪的；frosty 严寒的,霜冻的；freezing 隆冬的；icy 冰冷的；damp 湿气的；wet 湿气的,有雨的；clear 辉煌的；mild 良善的,和煦的；changeable多变的；calm 安谧的；pleasant 令东说念主愉悦的；feathery鹅毛般的；tiny极小的；awful可怕的,极坏的

语块

heavy rain大雨；

continuous rain连编握住的雨；

unbearably hot 难以忍耐的热；

a cold dark night 清冷的暮夜；

clear up 放睛；

the thundering clouds 电闪雷鸣的云；

be buried in snow 深埋雪中；

cool and refreshing breeze 凉爽清新的风；open sky露天；

rain cats and dogs 下着澎湃大雨

【经典句子背诵】

1. Dark clouds were gathering in the sky天外乌云密布。

2. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.咱们搬家那天,雨下得很大。

3. The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm.风在屋外呼啸。咱们正在资格一场可怕的雷雨。

4. The pure feathery snowflakes were dancing gracefully in the air, making a beautiful picture.纯白的鹅毛大雪漫天遨游,像一幅好意思艳的画。

5. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind, it began to rain cats and dogs.风是非地刮,树在大风中摇晃,尔后大雨澎湃。

【经典句子仿写】

1. We had no choice but to sleep under the open sky. ( sleep, sky) 咱们别无选择,只可睡在露寰宇。

2. Black clouds spread across the sky quickly. ( cloud, spread)乌云很快遮住了天外。

3. A cool breeze blew through the quiet park. ( breeze, blow)凉爽的微风吹拂着寂寥的公园。

4. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house. ( pour, beat)大雨澎湃而下,溪水上升,风急吹,拍打着屋子。

5. On a snowy day, the winds grew stronger and the snow turned into a snowstorm. ( snowy, turn)某寰宇雪,风越吹越大,把飘雪变成了一场摇风雪。

二

日夜轮转与时序更迭

季节

spring春；summer夏；autumn/fall秋；winter冬

已而

sunlight阳光；darkness黯澹；sunrise日出；sunset日落；afterglow晚霞

语块

in the breeze 在微风中；

on the summer day 在类热的夏天；

in a cold winter 在清冷的冬天

【经典句子背诵】

1. The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.第一缕阳光柔嫩得让东说念主不忍触摸。

2. From the distance, he saw some dim light in the village.从迢遥,他看到村子里有些黯淡的灯光。

3. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine.伴跟着一缕阳光,通盘这个词世界鲜花绽放。

4. Bars of sunlight slanted down through the tall narrow windows.一缕缕阳光从高而狭窄的窗户中照耀进来。

5. The sun was so bright that it even shone through the haze over the small town.阳光是那么亮堂,以致穿透了小镇上空的阴雨。

【经典句子仿写】

1. The sweetness of the sun fills my heart. ( sun, fill)我的心里尽是阳光的甘好意思。

2. Upon the arrival of spring, beautiful birds would sing happily in the park. ( spring, sing)春天一到,好意思艳的鸟儿就会在公园里兴奋地颂扬。

3. As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, he quickened his steps. (darken, dim)天外越来越黑,光辉越来越暗,他加速了要领。

4. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness. ( hide, thick)日暮途远,浓浓的夜色中很丢脸清任何东西。

5. It was near midnight in an extremely cold winter, and the temperature was minus 9 degrees everywhere. ( midnight, minus)那是一个特地清冷的冬天,快到午夜的时候,气温到处王人是零下9摄氏度。

三

日月星辰

名词

sun 太阳；sunshine 阳光；sunrise日出；sunset日落；star星星:moon月亮；moonlight蟾光

形色词

sunny 阳光裕如的,和煦的:starry 布满星星的,星光闪耀的

语块

in the warm spring sunshine 在春天和缓的阳光里；

the rising sun冉冉起飞的太阳；

the setting sun 落日；

under the burning sun of mid-summer 在盛夏灼热的阳光里；

deep blue sky蔚蓝的天外；

shining/glowing stars 闪亮的星；

a cloudless/clear sky 晴空

【经典句子背诵】

1. Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝相同讳饰了繁密的天外。

2. Bathed in the golden sunlight, the sea rippled and sparkled charmingly.大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,浪荡沉溺东说念主的波光。

3. The moon watched from the sky behind the clouds as the stars blink their eyes in fatigue.月藏在云后偷看,星星带着倦意眨了眨眼睛。

4. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin我沐浴在阳光下好像亲吻着每寸肌肤。

5. The night began to fall and the stars appeared in the sky, twinkling their eyes at us with sympathy.夜幕来临,天上星星一闪一闪,轸恤地向咱们眨着眼睛。

【经典句子仿写】

1. The sky was dotted with sparkling stars. (dot, sparkling)天外点缀着繁星。

2.The sunshine cast beautiful shadows among the leaves. (sunshine, shadow)阳光在树叶间投下好意思艳的影子。

3. The mountain villages were bathed in the quiet moonlight. (bathe, moonlight)山村沐浴在静谧的月色中。

4. The sunset painted the sky in hues of orange and pink, a perfect ending to a perfect day. (sunset, paint)夕阳将天外染成橙粉色，为完好意思的一天画上句号。

5. The sun filtered through the clouds, signaling the end of the rain. (filter, signal)阳光穿过云层，预示着雨的杀青。

四

江河湖海

名词

mountain山；hill 小山,丘陵；peak 山岳；valley峡谷；hollow山谷；rock 岩石； river 江河； lake湖；sea 大海；ocean 海洋；bay海湾；beach 海滩；shore 海岸；coast 海岸,海滨；stream 溪流；wave波,波澜；reef 暗礁

语块

snow-capped mountains雪山

grand /wide/deep valley大/宽/深快谷landscape of lakes and hills 山光水色beautiful mountains and clear waters 山净水秀；

shallow/deep stream浅的/深的溪流；

the bank of the lake 湖畔；

mountain range 山脉；

inviting views 迷东说念主的欢欣

【经典句子背诵】

1. The river makes bends or menders through low valleys to the plain where rice grows.河流周折地流过低谷,流向助长稻谷的平原。

2. The roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.波澜的吼怒和海鸟的呜叫奏起了海岸的音乐。

3. Suddenly , there was a loud sound, the earth was not splitting but the sea was roaring.骤然,一声巨响,不是地面开裂,而是大海吼怒。

4. The surface of the sea was gilded with a layer of silvery light. 海面上镀上了一层银色的光。

5. The water was deep blue and the sunlight glittered on its surface, making it look like a giant mirror.海水深蓝，阳光在其名义能干，使它看起来像一面重大的镜子。

【经典句子仿写】

1. The mountain is covered entirely in dense jungle. (cover, jungle)这座山系数袒护在粘稠的森林中。

2.The waves were rising higher and higher. (wave, rise)波澜翻腾得越来越高。

3. A clear little stream ran merrily along its narrow way. (stream, merry)澄澈的小溪沿着狭窄的溪说念兴奋地流淌着。

4. On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and winds were howling. (stormy, howl)阿谁摇风雨的暮夜里,波澜大力拍打,狂风吼怒不啻。

5. We found ourselves in a fairyland: warm breeze, deep valleys, high mountains and green grass. (find, breeze)咱们发现我方身处瑶池之中:暖风、山地、峻岭和青草。

五

花鸟鱼虫

名词

flower花；bird鸟；fish鱼；dog狗；cat猫；monkey山公

语块

fragrant flowers 芬芳的花朵

the perfume of flowers 花朵的幽香

green grass 绿草

the song of birds 鸟鸣

【经典句子背诵】

1.The egret spread its wings like a white cloud, dancing in the misty spring rain.白鹭舒展双翅如白云，在概括春雨中翩跹起舞。

2. Fireflies dotted the summer night, turning the meadow into a field of floating stars.萤火虫点缀夏夜，将草地化作一派流动的星海。

3. Sunflower seeds flew in the wind, carried to faraway fields to grow.葵花籽随风飘散，飞向远方的旷野助长。

4. A warm and sunny afternoon on a holiday, birds were singing and flowers were waving in the breeze.一个阳光明媚的沐日,和缓的午后,鸟儿在颂扬,花儿在微风中摇曳。

5. A few hours into the trek, he saw eyes in the distance, so he grabbed his bat before realizing it was just a stray dog.远程跋涉几个小时后，他看到了迢遥的眼睛，是以他捏起了球棒，才刚烈到那仅仅一只流浪狗。

【经典句子仿写】

1. Birds greet the new day with their morning song. (greet, bird)凝听鸟儿用晨歌招待新鲜的一天。

2. They heard the chatter of birds among the bushes. (chatter, bush)他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喳喳声。

3. The crickets were playing the violin deep in the grass. (cricket, violin)蟋蟀在草丛深处拉着小提琴。

4. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. (lovely, vine)那是一个好意思好的春日,玫瑰藤在变绿。

5. With the wolf glaring at him fiercely outside the car, Mac was on the edge of breaking down. (glare, edge)跟着这只狼在车外凶狠貌地怒目着他，麦克将近崩溃。

六

森林原野

名词

forest 森林:jungle 森林:plain平原;grassland草原;treetop树梢

形色词

dark 黑压压的;silent 寂寥的

语块

the thick forest 粘稠的森林;

out of one's reach 够不到

【经典句子背诵】

1. In the distance is a stretch of grassland.迢遥是连绵一派的草原。

2.The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness.如华盖般的树枝排山压卵,把小径笼罩在黯澹中。

3. The leaves glowed in the early morning light like hundreds of tiny hands.枝桠在朝阳下闪闪发光,犹如几百只纤细的小手。

4. The wide plain , with thousands of animals on the move, was an awesome spectacle.屈指可数只动物在广漠的平原上跑动,果真令东说念主颂扬的奇不雅。

5. The forest seemed to sigh as the wind passed through the trees, carrying whispers of the past.风穿过树林时，森林仿佛发出感喟，佩戴着往昔的低语。

【经典句子仿写】

1. Immediately an absolute darkness ruled the forest. (darkness, rule)移时间,黯澹笼罩了森林。

2.The grassland smelt fresh and sweet after rain. (grassland, smell)雨后的草原闻起来清新香甜。

3. The lake is situated at the eastern of the mountain range. (situate, range)湖泊位于山脉的东部。

4. The thick forest stretched as far as the eye could see. (thick, stretch)粘稠的森林广大无垠。

5. The tree stood out from the rest of the landscape, bathed in a bright angelic light. (landscape, bathe)那棵树从周围的欢欣中脱颖而出,沐浴在天神般的清辉中。

读后续写环境描绘六大场景精真金不怕火篇

一、短语测验。

行使符合短语,并用其正确花样填空,然后翻译成汉语。

1.The rain ___________ the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight

2. The sound of my footsteps ___________the gracefully waving reeds.

3. The sky ___________numerous twinkling stars.

4. The garden looked so beautiful with the setting sun ___________the windows.

5. The mountain top ___________snow.

6. She ___________the sunshine and enjoyed the warmth.

【参考谜底】

1.drummed on 翻译：两水拍打着窗户,向临了一缕阳光告别。

2. was accompanied by 翻译：我的脚步声伴跟着优好意思舞动着的芦苇。

3. is dolled with 翻译：天外中点级着巨额能干的星星。

4. reflected in 翻译：落日映照在窗户上,院于显得格外的好意思。

5. was covered with 翻译：山顶被积雪覆差。

6. was bathed in 翻译：她沐浴在阳光下,享受着和缓。

二、语境测验

按照教唆条目完成下列句子。

1.皑皑的鹅毛般的大雪在空中鸾歌凤舞。

The pure feathery snowflakes __________ in the air

2.可怕的大雨正在拍打着窗户。

The dreadful rain __________the windows.

3.蓝天、白云、鸟鸣、鲜花让咱们惊呆了。The blue sky, white clouds , singing birds and fragrant flowers __________.

4.在资格了令东说念主劳累的远程跋涉之后,咱们发现我方踏进于瑶池之中:周折的河流、暖风、山地和青山绿草。

After a tiring and long journey, we __________in a fairyland: winding rivers, warm breeze , deep valleys. high mountains and green grass.

5.咱们诧异地发现阳光果然早早地透过窗帘照耀了进来。

We were surprised to find that the morning sunshine __________through the curtain in such an early hour.

6. It was a still, sweet day of early summer; ____________________ (树叶似乎更绿了)

7. The skies were dark. ____________________ (一阵大风是非地刮着)，cutting my face like a knife, I shook with cold and fear as I walked home.

8. ____________________ (被冷风所包裹)，the dullness of the day was softened, providing a soothing atmosphere for the soul.

9. ____________________ (沐浴在阳光下) and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.

10.With ____________________ (头顶上方有千里重的乌云)，the atmosphere became heavy with anticipation of a storm.

【参考谜底】

1. danced gracefully

2. was beating against

3. held us entirely in their power

4. found ourselves

5. had flooded in

6. the leaves seemed greener; the flowers seemed brighter

7. A strong wind was blowing hard

8. Wrapped in a cool breeze

9. Bathed in the sunshine

10. dark clouds looming overhead

三、字据括号内教唆翻译底下的句子。

1. 连绵滚动的山丘上铺满了鲜活的绿草。(hills)________________________________________________________________

2. 在夏令的午后，海滩上的沙子在灼热的阳光下闪闪发光。(sunshine)________________________________________________________________

3. 他们在林中迷途了，周围是满地落叶和高耸的树木。(fallen leaves and trees)________________________________________________________________

4. 夜晚，露营者围坐在营火旁，头上是一派繁星点点的天外。(stars )________________________________________________________________

5. 大雨是非地敲打着屋顶，发出震耳欲聋的轰鸣声，并吞了通盘其他的声息。(rain)________________________________________________________________

6. 晨雾给山谷蒙上一层薄雾，使一切显得深重而迷东说念主。(morning mist )________________________________________________________________

7. 外面摇风雪狠毒，家东说念主围坐在壁炉旁，感到和温存安全。(snowstorm)________________________________________________________________

8. 他在徒步时感到与森林覆盖的小山有着深远的相干，每一步王人让他更接近当然。(hills)________________________________________________________________

9. 在那片邑邑苍苍的森林里，鸟儿兴奋地颂扬着，宛如在庆祝新的一天的到来。( forest)________________________________________________________________

10. 看着窗外飘落的雪花，她感到一种深深的孤独感，但她知说念春天总会如约而至。(snowflakes)________________________________________________________________

【参考谜底】

1. The rolling hills were covered with lush green grass.

2. On a summer afternoon, the sand on the beach glittered under the burning sunshine.

3. They got lost in the forest, with fallen leaves and towering trees all around.

4. At night, campers sat around the fire under a sky filled with twinkling stars.

5. Heavy rain pounded against the roof, making a deafening roar that drowned out all other sounds.

6. The morning mist blanketed the valley in a layer of fog, making everything mysterious and enchanting.

7. With the raging snowstorm outside, the family gathered around the fireplace, feeling warm and safe.

8. He felt a deep connection to the forested hills as he hiked, each step bringing him closer to nature.

9. In that lush forest, the birds were singing merrily , as if they were celebrating the arrival of a new day.

10. As she watched the falling snowflakes outside the window, she felt a deep sense of loneliness, but she knew that spring would come as sure as it always does

高考读后续写照题实战应用

1. (2025·浙江1月卷)As they emerged from the station, Kevin gazed at the expansive sky, a profound sense of fulfillment washing over him.当他们走出车站时，凯文疑望着繁密的天外，一种深深的满足感涌上心头。

2. (2025·八省联考卷)The light dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart.灯光渐渐变暗，我别无选择，只可带着一颗狭窄的心看电影。

3. (2024·新课标I卷) I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September.我在九月一个清冷、湿气、牢记的夜晚遭遇了冈特。

4. (2021·新课标I卷) The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.黎明的阳光照进来，全家东说念主千里浸在幸福和爱中。

读后续写环境描绘语篇精真金不怕火

1．（2025·湖南·二模）阅读底下材料，字据其本色和所给段落起原语续写两段，使之组成一篇完整的漫笔。

In the quiet town of Willow Creek, lived a young woman named Sarah. Sarah was an artist, known for her paintings of landscapes and animals, but beneath her calm appearance, she struggled with anxiety and depression. The pressures of her job and the isolation she often felt had a negative impact on her mental health, and she spent many days feeling overwhelmed and disconnected from the world around her.One afternoon, as Sarah was leaving the local art gallery, she noticed a small, scruffy dog sitting by the door. It looked lost, hungry, and a little scared. Sarah’s heart softened as she approached the dog, offering it a piece of her sandwich. The dog wagged its tail and sniffed at the food, but instead of eating, it sat down next to her, as if asking for something more. Feeling an instinctive (直观的)pull, Sarah decided to take the dog home with her, naming it Sunny.Over the next few weeks, Sunny became Sarah’s constant companion. Every morning, he would greet her with an excited bark and a wagging tail. Sarah soon discovered that Sunny was not just a pet, but a therapy dog. Whenever she felt her anxiety starting to set in, Sunny would push her hand with his nose or curl up beside her, offering her the comfort of his presence. His gentle behavior and unconditional love helped Sarah feel less alone, and for the first time in months, she began to feel like she had a purpose.One evening, Sarah decided to take Sunny for a walk through the woods near a popular campsite. The sun was setting, and the air was fresh and cool. As they walked deeper into the forest, Sarah’s mind wandered to the dark thoughts she had been battling for so long. Suddenly, Sunny stopped in his tracks and started barking furiously, looking alertly at a thick patch of bushes. Sarah felt a surge of panic, wondering what had startled (惊吓)him. But before she could react, Sunny dashed toward the bushes, pulling Sarah along with him.

防护：(1)续写词数应为150个傍边；

(2)请按如下花样在答题卡的相应位置作答。Out of nowhere, Sarah heard the sound of a girl crying in a weak voice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Seeing the girl’s relieved smile, Sarah realized Sunny not only saved a life, but inspired her to change and create. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文

Out of nowhere, Sarah heard the sound of a girl crying in a weak voice. She quickly followed Sunny, who dashed through the bushes, and found a small girl stuck in a deep hole, unable to climb out. The girl was sobbing, clearly terrified. Sarah immediately called for help, then used a nearby branch and rope to create a makeshift rescue tool. With Sunny’s support, she managed to pull the girl to safety. They sat together for a moment to calm her down before heading back to the campsite.

Seeing the girl’s relieved smile, Sarah realized Sunny not only saved a life, but inspired her to change and create. That evening, feeling contented to have extended a helping hand, she began writing about their journey, detailing how Sunny helped her overcome anxiety and find purpose. She planned to published the story, sharing how animals can heal and transform lives. Sunny had not only rescued the girl but also helped Sarah to regain passion for life and connection.

【导语】本文以东说念主物为足迹展开，主要评释了Sarah和她的休养犬Sunny在森林中不测救下别称被困女孩的故事，以及此次资格怎样变调和激发了Sarah。

【详解】

1. 段落续写：

① 由第一段首句本色“不知从那边传来一个女孩眇小的哭声。”可知，第一段可描绘Sarah和Sunny在森林中遭遇了别称需要匡助的女孩。② 由第二段首句本色“看到小女孩轻装上阵的笑貌，Sarah刚烈到Sunny不仅接济了一条生命，还激发了她去变调和创造。”可知，第二段可描绘此次资格让Sarah刚烈到Sunny的攻击性，并激发她在艺术创作中融入新的主题。

2. 续写足迹：Sarah和Sunny在森林顺耳到女孩的哭声，发现女孩被困——Sarah呼唤救济并劝慰女孩，Sunny提供扶植——女孩获救后，Sarah刚烈到Sunny的价值，决定用艺术传播心机健康和休养动物的攻击性——Sarah的绘图作品启动反馈她与Sunny的旅程，展示东说念主与动物之间的纽带和调节力量。

3. 词汇激活：

动作类：

①发现：discover/find

②反馈：reflect/mirror

③刚烈到：realize/be aware of

心思类：

①狭窄的：frightened/scared

②劝慰：comfort/relieve

【点睛】

【高分句型1】

Following Sunny through the underbrush, she found a small child, no older than six, trembling with fear.(行使了当今分词作状语)【高分句型2】On arriving at the campsite, they were greeted by the anxious parents, who were thankful to see the girl was all right.(行使了who携带的非范围性定语从句)

2．（2025·河北保定·模拟展望）阅读底下材料，字据其本色和所给段落起原语续写两段，使之组成一篇完整的漫笔。

As I’ve grown older, my connection to nature has become stronger. Recently, I was fortunate to spend a good part of a week in the wilderness, following the teachings of my father from my childhood. Ever since I was 10, my sister, father, and I would load up his canoe (独木舟) with supplies and set off into the heart of Algonquin Park.There were years when I ignored the call of Algonquin, caught up in the busyness of life —graduating from school and raising young children. It all felt incredibly demanding. But as time passed, my children grew older, and the call of Algonquin grew louder.With the support of my family, I finally listened to that call again, and started planning to take part in one of our family trips there. My family's rich experience in the outdoors has been invaluable for such trips. My sister, a teacher, carefully planned our trips while my dad, a skilled outdoorsman, effortlessly handled tasks like setting up camp and preparing meals. And my husband is really strong and good at moving things around.But, as the trip got closer, my husband suddenly hurt his leg. And suddenly, I was faced with managing the first part of the trip as the only adult. Could I drive my daughter, alone, to Algonquin's remote north boundary to meet my dad and mom? Could I steer (驾驶) the canoe? Could I carry the canoe?I had driven across Canada, alone, in my twenties, well before Google Maps. I was pretty sure I could steer if we kept to smaller lakes that were less likely to become windswept. But I feared carrying a canoe. Plus, lifting it onto my shoulders seemed impossible for someone of my strength. But Algonquin was calling me. I recalled the fearless independence of my younger self and called Dad.

防护：1.续写词数应为150傍边；2.请按如下花样在答题卡的相应位置作答。

“If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms.

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范文

“If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle. Despite my initial doubts, we started our adventure, determined to meet my parents at the appointed spot. The journey was filled with challenges, but with each one we overcame, my confidence grew. Sailing the lake was less frightening than I had expected, and my daughter proved to be a capable and enthusiastic co-pilot.

When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. Their faces lit up with pride as they saw us paddle in. “You did it!” my dad cried, hugging me tightly. “We knew you could,” my mom added, her voice filled with emotion. Together, we unpacked the canoe and set up camp, sharing stories of our journey around a campfire. That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me. The wilderness helped me become stronger and more independent, reminding me of the strength I carried within.

【导语】

著述以东说念主物为足迹展开，作家回忆起从小与父亲和妹妹沿途在阿尔冈昆公园探险的资格，但曾因生计的接力而暂时忽略了这份召唤。跟着时辰的推移，孩子们长大，作家对阿尔冈昆的向往再次被叫醒。在家东说念主的扶植下，作家启动策动再次参与家庭旅行。相干词，邻近开拔时，丈夫骤然受伤，作家不得不独自承担起措置旅行初段的株连，包括独自驾车带男儿前去阿尔冈昆公园，以及濒临驾驶和搬运独木舟的挑战。尽管作家对独自驾车有信心，但对搬运独木舟感到担忧。但最终，作家对当然的渴慕降服了怯生生，她回念念起了年青时丧胆的寥寂精神，并决定招待挑战，相干父亲接续前行。

【详解】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句本色““若是咱们裁汰路子，找一艘苟简的独木舟，那咱们就去，”我告诉他。”可知，第一段可描绘作家克服辛勤，驾驶独木舟与父母会合的流程。

②由第二段首句本色“当咱们终于抵达时，我的父母展开双臂招待咱们。”可知，第二段可描绘作家的父母为作家感到自重，一家东说念主共享路径中的故事以及作家的感悟。

2.续写足迹：选择路子，踏上冒险之旅——克服辛勤，获胜会合——父母夸赞——共享路径故事——感悟

3.词汇激活

动作类

①选择：chose/pick out

②决定作念某事：determine to do sth/decide to do sth

③充满：be filled with/be full of

④拥抱：hug/embrace

心思类

①令东说念主狭窄的： frightening/dreadful

②充满海涵的：enthusiastic/passionate

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle.（行使了that携带定语从句）

[高分句型2]

That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me.（行使了that携带宾语从句）[高分句型3]

Together, we unpacked the canoe and set up camp, sharing stories of our journey around a campfire.（行使了当今分词短语作念状语）

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